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@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ Karin's injury throbbed and she tightened her grip on the blanket covering her b
Karin's heart beat a little faster. "I-I'm Karin." Karin's heart beat a little faster. "I-I'm Karin."
"Suras. In fact, if you need anything, just yell for Sur and I'll come running." She smiled broadly while she used her foot the drag a small stool out from the corner and used it to prop her platter on it. She looked around and then held up a finger. "Why don't you get back on the bed and I'll get a bed tray from the newlywed room." "Suras. In fact, if you need anything, just yell for Sur and I'll come running." She smiled broadly while she used her foot to drag a small stool out from the corner and used it to prop her platter on it. She looked around and then held up a finger. "Why don't you get back on the bed and I'll get a bed tray from the newlywed room."
"I can eat at the table." "I can eat at the table."

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@ -40,8 +40,6 @@ Karin's hand tightened on her glass. "N-No. I think I'm good."
Karin moaned softly. "I haven't had one of those in months. I would love one." Karin moaned softly. "I haven't had one of those in months. I would love one."
Suras smiled brightly. "Then in the morning, after all the night guests head out, I'll draw one up for you."
"In the morning, after the night guests leave, I'll have a bath drawn for you. That way, you'll have a couple hours to soak without interruptions." "In the morning, after the night guests leave, I'll have a bath drawn for you. That way, you'll have a couple hours to soak without interruptions."
"Thank you." "Thank you."

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@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ Karin whimpered. "I...." The words died in her throat. She fought the urges of r
Suras remained still for a moment. Then she stood up. "Well, if there is anything you need, just call. I don't have much to do until sundown, so I can take all the time I want." There was a pause, almost teasing, before the younger woman straightened. "All you have to do is ask." Suras remained still for a moment. Then she stood up. "Well, if there is anything you need, just call. I don't have much to do until sundown, so I can take all the time I want." There was a pause, almost teasing, before the younger woman straightened. "All you have to do is ask."
Karin froze, a quizzical thought slithering through her head. Was Suras interested in her? Or was it her just being friendly? If the former then a stolen kiss would bring them closer. But if the latter, then it would any chances later down the line. Karin froze, a quizzical thought slithering through her head. Was Suras interested in her? Or was it her just being friendly? If the former, then a stolen kiss would bring them closer. But if the latter, then it wouldn't be any chances later down the line.
She closed her eyes for a moment. The older she got, the more she struggled with the fencing of desires among people. She understood the blade. She knew monsters and how to kill them. But beautiful woman---alluring ones---they required a finesses that she didn't think she had anymore. She closed her eyes for a moment. The older she got, the more she struggled with the fencing of desires among people. She understood the blade. She knew monsters and how to kill them. But beautiful woman---alluring ones---they required a finesses that she didn't think she had anymore.

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@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ Karin shrugged. "That's my talent, I made it sharper."
"Really?" "Really?"
"That's why I'm a good hunter. I sharpen blades by touching them." She gave a sheepish grin. "That's why I'm such a good hunter." "I sharpen blades by touching them." She gave a sheepish grin. "That's why I'm such a good hunter."
It also made her a good assistant to a chef. Her thoughts briefly darken when she thought about her husband. They had fallen in love in the kitchen. It was also where they broke apart. It also made her a good assistant to a chef. Her thoughts briefly darken when she thought about her husband. They had fallen in love in the kitchen. It was also where they broke apart.

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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Karin had to leave but it tore her heart open to do so. She packed her belonging
The clothes wouldn't remain neatly folded for long, but that was the price of being a hunter. On top of the pack, she put her set of backup knives among the fabric. The clothes wouldn't remain neatly folded for long, but that was the price of being a hunter. On top of the pack, she put her set of backup knives among the fabric.
When she finished, she looked around the room until the memories rose up. Choking bcak a sob, she dug into her pack and pulled out a handful of coins to put on the table. When she finished, she looked around the room until the memories rose up. Choking back a sob, she dug into her pack and pulled out a handful of coins to put on the table.
There was already a stack there, covered in dust. There was already a stack there, covered in dust.
@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ Karin stopped. "You're early."
"Yes, in two days." Karin realized she was hesitating herself, but it was too late. She had already said goodbye. "Yes, in two days." Karin realized she was hesitating herself, but it was too late. She had already said goodbye.
He patted his ax and looked her from head to toe. "Then why are you dressed to leave? Your peach ended up being an apple?" He grinned. "That mean I have a chance or did you spoil this town for the both of us." He patted his ax and looked her from head to toe. "Then why are you dressed to leave? Your peach ended up being an apple?" He grinned. "That mean I have a chance or did you spoil this town for the both of us?"
Fighting the tears, Karin shook her head. "No, I'm was going to the next town over to wait for you. Please tell me there is a job." Her breast ached with the idea of a fight. Fighting the tears, Karin shook her head. "No, I'm was going to the next town over to wait for you. Please tell me there is a job." Her breast ached with the idea of a fight.

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@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ Then she heard the screaming.
"Ready weapons!" bellowed Roal. He slowed minutely and Karin came up next to him. "Ready weapons!" bellowed Roal. He slowed minutely and Karin came up next to him.
Reaching over, Karin pressed her hand against the side of his balance. The edge shone with light as she fixed the burrs and imperfections, bringing into a killing sharpness that could slice through anything. Reaching over, Karin pressed her hand against the side of his blade. The edge shone with light as she fixed the burrs and imperfections, bringing into a killing sharpness that could slice through anything.
She pulled her hand back and unsheathed her own sword, doing the same. She pulled her hand back and unsheathed her own sword, doing the same.