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 After a long job of hunting monsters, Karin was ready for a little relaxation, a warm bed, and hopefully a peach of a woman to keep her company. The former didn't look like a possibility in the righteous town of San Graif but Karin still needed the sleep.
 
-Then she heard the most beautiful voice singing in the streets. Following brought her closer to finding company for her days off, but there was someone already else interested in the songbird in the kitchen. How far would Karin go for a stranger, even a beautiful one?
+Then she heard the most beautiful voice singing in the streets. Getting closer brought her to a beauty she hoped would warm more than her heart, but a rival crudely claimed his interest in a way that Karin found offensive. How far would she go for a stranger, even a stunning one?