* read the story out loud and fixed things ([bea9559](https://gitlab.com/fedran/songbird-in-the-kitchen/commit/bea95599cede5a453923c0d14f2d7d320e191348))
* integrating changes from writing group ([37c261e](https://gitlab.com/fedran/songbird-in-the-kitchen/commit/37c261e59c8a3f37349f62667fb1c50623e3d392))
* missed an edit ([b1de610](https://gitlab.com/fedran/songbird-in-the-kitchen/commit/b1de6107fb4ce50cde5991b763ac6ed417c210dc))
### Features
* added a new chapter ([54b98a9](https://gitlab.com/fedran/songbird-in-the-kitchen/commit/54b98a9b2d430716c1c059e9a136e0aca724fb7a))