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fix: showing some of the POV switches of identity

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If I Lead This Dance by D. Moonfire
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This is the repository for *If I Lead This Dance* by D. Moonfire.
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"I know what you mean. I feel like I should have been practicing far more with some of these ladies. They were very formal and tense. Not my type of partner." He winked and drew Galadin around.
Galadin's stomach clenched. He knew exactly what Benard wanted. It couldn't be found on the dance floor.
Glorias's stomach clenched. He knew exactly what Benard wanted. It couldn't be found on the dance floor.
The music brought them in a circle. Galadin's dress swirled out in perfect harmony with the other dancers. He felt like he was in one of the paintings that he admired for years. It brought tears with the feeling of being complete.
The music brought them in a circle. Glorias's dress swirled out in perfect harmony with the other dancers. He felt like he was in one of the paintings that he admired for years. It brought tears with the feeling of being complete.
Too soon, the music slowed and came to a stop. When a ripple of applause filled the room, the dancers began to drift back to their tables.
Galadin didn't want to leave. He looked into Benard's eyes, wondering if there could ever be anything between the two of them. New fantasies rushed through his mind, setting his skin on fire and quickening his heart.
Galadin didn't want to leave. He looked into Benard's eyes, wondering if there could ever be anything between the two of them. New fantasies rushed through his mind, setting his skin on fire and quickening his heart. He wanted to be Glorias completely in that moment, to imagine a world where he never had to go back.
"I don't want to leave," Benard said quietly.
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"No," his partner said. "You never have to leave."
Galadin's heart skipped another beat.
Glorias's heart skipped another beat.
The musicians started up a quieter dance for the intermission between the formal ones. Normally it just filled in the silence but this time, Galadin wanted to keep dancing.
The musicians started up a quieter dance for the intermission between the formal ones. Normally it just filled in the silence but this time, Glorias wanted to keep dancing.
Benard ran his fingertips starting from Galadin's elbow to his wrist. "Now, do you remember the Fox step from Dame Dorin's class? You were very good at it but I seem to recall you were in the lead at the time."
Benard ran his fingertips starting from Glorias's elbow to his wrist. "Now, do you remember the Fox step from Dame Dorin's class? You were very good at it but I seem to recall you were in the lead at the time."
Galadin shivered with fright and excitement.
Glorias shivered with fright and excitement.
Benard gently turned Galadin's wrist until it was Benard taking the lead.
Benard gently turned Glorias's wrist until it was Benard taking the lead.
Galadin's breath locked in his throat. He trembled as he looked up into Benard's warm eyes.
Glorias's breath locked in his throat. He trembled as he looked up into Benard's warm eyes.
"May I lead this dance?"
With a happy smile blurred by happy tears, Galadin nodded. "Yes."
With a happy smile blurred by happy tears, Glorias nodded. "Yes."
"Good, because I couldn't wait to ask for your hand tonight. I would be honored to fill your dance card for the rest of the evening, Bedame Glorias kia Kasin."