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D. Moonfire 2019-06-29 15:26:59 -05:00
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@ -42,21 +42,21 @@ Karin leaned against the wall for a moment and then came down the hall. "Hey, Ro
Roal turned with annoyance. "What are you doing here?" Roal turned with annoyance. "What are you doing here?"
Karin glanced between the two of them. From the waitress' face, it was obvious that she wasn't interested in Roal. However, her friend was probably too tired and exhausted to see it. Painting a smile on her face, she headed over to them. "Are you sure you are up to this?" Karin glanced between the two of them. From the waitress' face, it was obvious that she wasn't interested in Roal but she was being polite. However, her friend was probably too tired and exhausted to see it. Painting a smile on her face, she headed over to them. "Are you sure you are up to this?"
Roal's eyes narrowed. Roal's eyes narrowed.
"With your leg, I mean." Karin yawned. "I mean, most of your favorite positions all require lefty." "With your leg, I mean." Karin yawned. "I mean, most of your favorite positions all require lefty."
"You claiming her after all?" His voice was low and he was blinking, he was struggling to stay awake just like her. Even if he did intice the waitress to bed, he'd probably be passed out in less than a minute. "You claiming her after all?" His voice was low and he was blinking, he was struggling to stay awake just like her. Even if he did lure the waitress to bed, he'd probably be passed out in less than a minute before he even got her dress off.
"Just taking care of my partner," Karin said as she slipped her arm around his wait. "Come on. You need sleep, old man." "Just taking care of my partner," Karin said as she slipped her arm around his waist and pinned her half-empty glass of whiskey against his hip. "Come on. You need sleep, old man."
"You're older than me," Roal said as he leaned into her. His voice lowered into a whisper. "Changed your mind on the peach?" "You're older than me," Roal said as he leaned into her. His voice lowered into a whisper. "Changed your mind on that peach?"
Karin glanced at the waitress and smiled. Karin glanced at the waitress and smiled.
The waitress smiled back. Her freckles caused Karin's body to grow flush. The waitress returned the smile. Her freckles caused Karin's body to grow flush but Karin knew she was also too tired to do anything.
"Maybe but neither of us are in any shape to do anything about it." Karin used her free hand to dig into her pocket to fetch out some coins. She had a few crowns which she handed out to the waitress. "Sorry about him," she mouthed. "Maybe but neither of us are in any shape to do anything about it." Karin used her free hand to dig into her pocket to fetch out some coins. She had a few crowns which she handed out to the waitress. "Sorry about him," she mouthed.
@ -66,6 +66,6 @@ When Karin got Roal to his room, she was sweating from the effort. Every second
"Night," he said before rolling fully-dressed and face down in his blankets. "Night," he said before rolling fully-dressed and face down in his blankets.
She sighed. "In the---" She sighed. "In the morn---"
He was already snoring. He was already snoring.

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{ {
"knownWords": [ "knownWords": [
"Garafin", "Garafin",
"Maril",
"Roal", "Roal",
"Roal's" "Roal's",
"Stac"
] ]
} }