diff --git a/chapters/chapter-002.md b/chapters/chapter-002.md
index c79d6ce..3796466 100644
--- a/chapters/chapter-002.md
+++ b/chapters/chapter-002.md
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ Her father held his arm over her chest to hold her in place as they raced throug
 
 As the crisp air of fall rushed past them, she shivered and held herself tight against her father.
 
-He looked nervous, his face pale and his grip together than she expected. They were moving too fast for her to ask questions.
+He looked nervous, his face pale and his grip tighter than she expected. They were moving too fast for her to ask questions.
 
 The family workshop was about a half hour ride during the day. The trip took them through a few valleys to a small woods nestled between two mountains. That was their family forest, the source of the wood that made her father's violins and the unique sound that came from his craft.
 
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ Sian half-slid, half-fell from his horse. His arms were tight on Linsan, guiding
 
 The right side of the workshop collapsed.
 
-"No," he screamed in a voice that felt like the heavens should have split open and cried. It was a sound she had never her father make before and it terrified her.
+"No," he screamed in a voice that felt like the heavens should have split open and cried. It was a sound she had never heard her father make before and it terrified her.
 
 He staggered forward.