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@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Ahead of them, she saw a village approaching. In her mind's eyes, she thought ab
Brook slowed slightly near the buildings but then passed through the town. Brook slowed slightly near the buildings but then passed through the town.
Linsan watched the buildings rush past. She spotted people outside, folks who may have seen the murderers passing by. However, Brook didn't seem to be inclined to stop. "D-Do you know where you're going?" Linsan watched the buildings rush past. She spotted people outside, folks who may have seen the murderers passing by. However, Brook didn't seem to be inclined to stop. "Do you know where you're going?"
Someone swore at them and the sound rose and fell before fading. Someone swore at them and the sound rose and fell before fading.
@ -50,8 +50,12 @@ Linsan took it and peered at it. She frowned as she stared at the unfamiliar sha
Brook spoke after a few moments, "The next place is a town called Jamorel. They have a mechanic on the north side. I also sent a request for a room at one of the local inns through the network." Brook spoke after a few moments, "The next place is a town called Jamorel. They have a mechanic on the north side. I also sent a request for a room at one of the local inns through the network."
She took a deep breath as the sobs seemed to quiet. "I'll get you a room. No reason for you to sleep in the car when I have a bed." She took a deep breath. When she spoke again, her voice was steadier. "I'll get you a room. No reason for you to sleep in the car when I have a bed."
Linsan bristled. "I can pay my own way." True, she had only done it once and she wasn't sure it would happen again. The casual way Brook mentioned it felt like Linsan had been clawed. Linsan bristled. "I can pay my own way." True, she had only done it once and she wasn't sure it would happen again. The casual way Brook mentioned it felt like Linsan had been clawed.
Brook gave her a hard look. She rolled her eyes before returning her attention to the road. "Don't worry, it won't be a fancy one." Brook gave her a hard look. She rolled her eyes before returning her attention to the road. "Don't worry, it won't be a fancy one."
Linsan glared at her. "I can pay," she muttered again.
Brook responded by accelerating her vehicle and pushing Linsan back into her seat. When Linsan looked over, she was smirking.