fix: tweaking chapters

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D. Moonfire 2020-08-24 20:05:21 -05:00
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@ -98,3 +98,5 @@ Smaller village between X and New Brunil.
Gainsburg is where the first time she played for money. 15 miles from home. Gainsburg is where the first time she played for money. 15 miles from home.
# Penesol (Her home town) # Penesol (Her home town)
# Fanasis Village

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@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ Ragon started to say something but then his eyes glanced up. Sharply inhaling, h
"Get up! We need to get out of this damn place and find my buggy! No one is bothering to help me," she snapped. "Get up! We need to get out of this damn place and find my buggy! No one is bothering to help me," she snapped.
Linsan jumped before turning to look up at her. She wasn't surprised to see that Brook was wearing an elegant evening dress but the contrast between her companion's outfit and everyone else was startling. Brook's dress looked more like the ones in the paintings, with ruffles and delicate embroidery. It was coordinated with her gloves and her fingernails. She even wore a hair piece with a bit of lace that covered part of her face and her dark curls. Linsan jumped before turning to look up at her. She wasn't surprised to see that Brook was wearing an elegant evening dress but the contrast between her companion's outfit and everyone else was startling. Brook's blue dress looked more like the ones in the paintings, with ruffles and delicate embroidery. It was coordinated with her gloves and her fingernails. She even wore a hair piece with a bit of lace that covered part of her face and her dark curls.
The words died in Linsan's throat. The words died in Linsan's throat.

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@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ For a moment, it was temping but the old lady obvious didn't have a lot of money
"Oh, why would that matter?" "Oh, why would that matter?"
Linsan waved and tried to escape the converation. "Thank you!" Linsan waved and tried to escape the conversation. "Thank you!"
"Who's your mother, Girl? Answer me!" "Who's your mother, Girl? Answer me!"

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"Dorsen", "Dorsen",
"Dukan", "Dukan",
"Dukan's", "Dukan's",
"Fanasis",
"Gainsburg", "Gainsburg",
"Kabisal", "Kabisal",
"Kamel", "Kamel",
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"Sterlig's", "Sterlig's",
"Sterligs", "Sterligs",
"Tabil", "Tabil",
"Tilbin",
"Tirain", "Tirain",
"Tisin", "Tisin",
"Tisin's", "Tisin's",