diff --git a/chapters/chapter-004.md b/chapters/chapter-004.md index 20cb5ea..7c95cb6 100644 --- a/chapters/chapter-004.md +++ b/chapters/chapter-004.md @@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ Linsan thought about chasing after her but the cuts and ached throbbed in her jo Her first thought was to run home but there was only one road leading into the valley. She wasn't going to give Brook a chance to ambush her. She had to wait. -With a hiss of pain, she got up and frantically looked for her violin. THe fear that Brook had smashed it hovered in her thoughts until she found it unharmed in the grass. With a gasp of relief, she snatched it up along brought it to the smashed remains of her instrument case. The sides of the leather-lined container had been shattered by whatever power Brook had summoned. +With a hiss of pain, she got up and frantically looked for her violin. The fear that Brook had smashed it hovered in her thoughts until she found it unharmed in the grass. With a gasp of relief, she snatched it up along brought it to the smashed remains of her instrument case. The sides of the leather-lined container had been shattered by whatever power Brook had summoned. Her vision blurred as she looked at the ruined wall of the workshop. Years ago, the fire had scorched the stones but Brook's power had blasted it apart. In the still crumbling opening, she could see the stones scattered dozens of feet in a spray pattern. diff --git a/chapters/chapter-005.md b/chapters/chapter-005.md index 7c96ca6..43bdf50 100644 --- a/chapters/chapter-005.md +++ b/chapters/chapter-005.md @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ topics: - Manifestation - Palisis - After the Destruction of Natural Order (Epigraph) - - My Fairest Rose # PLay + - My Fairest Rose # Play - Silk Talents - Virgin Instrument warnings: @@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ Linsan looked back. Judging from Brook's expression, she obviously didn't know a "I'm sorry, but you have to admit, we're never going back to the way it was." -Linsan felt her father's profound sadness. Over the years, she's seen her father's friends drifting away as fortunes shifted. Dukan was one of them. THe conversation between DUkan and her father felt like she was watching the last plank bridging their past lives and today being removed. +Linsan felt her father's profound sadness. Over the years, she's seen her father's friends drifting away as fortunes shifted. Dukan was one of them. The conversation between Dukan and her father felt like she was watching the last plank bridging their past lives and today being removed. "I understand, Duk." Sian sighed and nodded.